Oh man she's pretty! She looks so fragile and cute. Normally I don't like drawings without any colors but this one, I love it. Her face is a little bit too black though.. and where is her mouth?

wow nice great work!

neat

great concept work ! i also like her curves
what's with the nose? it looks very egdey

cute. still the head is abit to big for my taste

Thanks for your comments, guys!
Many mistakes? Yes... too many, maybe. But, when she came through, she was exactly as I wanted her to be. If I would have dare to "correct" mistakes on her, she wouldn't be SHE.
This image is almost twice the original sketch's size.

Have fun!

Lovely sketch

great sketch!! muy bueno , me gusta sobretodo la soltura del lápiz... muy bueno!

very nice effects +10/10

sweet style! i love it!

real cool. great contrast.

her hair are fantastic. great work !

J.

beautiful!

I love it! I don't see a mouth, though.

Why is her face so dark?

Its cool, but the anatomical inaccuracys (super large head) are slightly distracting.

Despite the drawing may have lots of errors, they are not what they've been listed here: I never meant her to have a perfect, accurate, realistic body. She just came like she is: dark face, no mouth, disproportionate... I don't know why, but I didn't dare to retouch her. I like her the way she is... pear it.

One advise for new artists: BEWARE THE CORRECTIONS; they often destroy the primary unconsciousness feeling.
One example (and confession): Look for my already posted "Mother and Son" drawing... well; I tried to remake this drawing unto a better finished illustration, and I've never got that baby's face's expression again. I've got divers iterations, but it never was the same.

However, thank you very much for your comments. And I hope mine could be a little useful for somebody.

Salud!

i like the style of this..shading is good and the background gives the atmostphere a mysterious feeling. nice job.

Beautiful sketch, the shading is amazing!